The who, when, what, and why of beta readers

The beta-reading stage is a critical part of the writing and publishing process, making beta readers some of the most important people in a writer's life. Although there are no set rules on who your readers should be or what you should (and can) ask from them, there are some general guidelines writers about to embark on the beta-reading process should be aware of.

 

The who and when

Beta readers are unpaid volunteers who read and give feedback on your story prior to publication. Ideally, your manuscript should go through the beta-reading process after your original round of self-edits but before you turn it over to a paid editor or submit to prospective agents. Some writers may choose to go through multiple rounds of beta-reading, one of which might come after the original paid edit. However, please keep in mind that beta readers should not take the place of a professional editor and that it is always safest to have content-, line-, and copy-editors review your work after making any major changes to your ms.

Unless you already have a significant loyal social media following to draw from, most of your readers are going to be friends, family, and people from your writing community. Within that group, you want to get as much diversity (gender, age, race, etc.) as possible, unless you are only writing for a specific gender or age group, such as women's fiction or YA. At least some should be regular readers in your genre, but they don't all have to be.

That being said, you don't want to set yourself, or your reader, up for failure. Not only will a poor experience be counter-productive for your work, it can damage your relationships. If you already know prospective volunteers wouldn't like your story—if, for instance, they hate being scared and your book is horror—they shouldn't be readers. If you know a person is unreliable or has a penchant for tearing other people down to make him- or herself feel better, s/he shouldn't be a reader. And, because readers should not share your work, those who couldn't keep your ms to themselves shouldn't be readers.

When sending out a call for volunteers, therefore, be clear about what your work is like—its genre, its target audience, its level of sex and violence, or anything else that might affect someone's ability to enjoy or appreciate the story—as well as a basic description of the process and your expectations. Don't be discouraged if you then don't get a lot of volunteers; all of those people who are passing are doing you (and your friendship) a huge favor.  

As you may have already gleaned, the most important qualities to look for in readers, beyond basic genre and content compatibility, are honesty, respectfulness, thoughtfulness, and trustworthiness. Your readers are the first people to see the result of what might have been years of blood-sweat-and-tears, when your manuscript is in a decent, but ultimately imperfect, form. It is therefore imperative to deal with people who understand this is your work (not a hobby) with real stakes and real deadlines; who want that work to succeed; and who are capable of balancing sincere, considered criticism with supportive feedback. 

Many, possibly most, of your readers won't be able to do all of that. Some won't follow-through at all. To be prepared for these eventualities, you should strive to get as many prospective readers as possible, albeit within the guidelines listed above. 

 

The what and Why

The purpose of beta-reading is to give authors a better idea of what works and what doesn't in their manuscripts. Readers should therefore only look at big-picture issues like pacing, clarity, believability, and character development.

Some particularly detail-oriented or didactic readers may want to give the kind of in-line feedback that's normally reserved for editors. However, because the manuscript will likely need significant revisions after the first, or even second, wave of beta readers, this kind of editing will usually be a waste of their time and yours.

Writers should therefore be clear at the outset about both what they do and don't want. If readers then ignore your instructions, well, that's on them. However, when you have people in your stable of potential readers who you already know fit this criteria, it may be best to see if they would be willing to wait for a later round, when the bulk of your novel will be solidified and their eye for detail will be more useful.

In one of her many vlogs on beta-reading, Jenna Moreci recommends writers keep frequent contact with their readers, reviewing every few chapters in weekly-ish interviews. While this is probably the ideal approach, the reality for most people is that such constant, rigorous feedback just isn't feasible.

Another option is to provide a list of questions with your manuscript (or sections of manuscript), along with instructions. Include a request for confirmation of receipt near the bottom of the questionnaire to be sure your readers actually reviewed the instructions before starting on the ms. Even if you choose the questionnaire (or questionnaires) over frequent interviews, ask your readers in the beginning for a follow-up phone call or e-chat to occur at the end of the process, after you have received and had time to think about their initial responses. 

Include at least two deadlines with your instructions: the first will be the day they should expect a reminder e-mail from you, the second should be the final deadline for them to send their responses. I recommend building-in a few days of padding between when you ask for their replies and your true date-of-no-return.

Because you want to compare their impressions and make your decisions about changes accordingly, there will come a time when late feedback will no longer be helpful or relevant. If you have readers who are still promising feedback after that date, you will need to politely tell them you had to move ahead without their responses. If they still send that too-late feedback, it is up to you whether to use or ignore it.   

The trickiest aspect of preparing your questionnaire will be balancing your need to get as much information as possible with your readers' need to not be overwhelmed. It will probably take a few rounds to get this formula right, but, generally speaking, you will be better off with open yet directed questions that give your readers plenty of space to provide comprehensive feedback. For instance, "Where did the plot become sluggish?" will probably be more useful than "What did you think of what happens on page 273?" Of course, the more often you are able to communicate with your readers, the more specific your questions can be.

 

No matter what, be nice

At the end of the day, writers must always keep in mind that readers are volunteers who are taking time out of their busy lives to read your ms. They need to feel safe giving you honest feedback, and it needs to be okay for them to only do what they are able, even if that means backing out completely. When someone turns out to be a terrible or simply ineffective reader, just use whatever aspects of their feedback you find helpful, kindly thank them for their effort, and don't work with them again.

However, when it comes to those wonderful few who show they care by getting their feedback to you on time with the kind of thoughtful, balanced responses no decent book (or writer) can do without, make sure they know how awesome they are. Then, see if there is anything you can do to make the process better for them in the future. Great readers are rare and precious, and once you find them you should do whatever you can to ensure they are willing to work with you again.

Housekeeping note

Now that I'm emerging from the pit of post-conference follow-ups and beginning my new work year, I'm looking forward to embarking on a steadier, more long-term schedule. With that in mind, I've had to consider what kind of pace I can reasonably keep with both "Notes from an Editor" and "Visual Writer" while also doing my other work. For now, I've decided to cut back to one post a month on this blog and one per week for the Visual Writer. VW posts will come out mid-week and NfaE mid-month, with specific dates for the latter still tbd. Of course, I would like to post more here, and if it turns out my time can handle it and the content demands it, I'll update my schedule accordingly.  

Four of the internet's best tips for pitching to agents

Photo by Derek Thomson

Photo by Derek Thomson

I'm currently on the road, making my way to New York for this year's Writer's Digest Conference. In anticipation and celebration of this weekend (and because right now I am thinking more as a writer than as an editor), I thought I would share some of the best advice I've come across for pitching to agents and the places I found them.  

But first, here's the information fiction writer's currently need to include in their incredibly brief 90-second pitch, per the Writer's Digest Conference guidelines:

Title
Word Count
Type of Book (mystery, memoir, self-help, etc.)
Comparable Titles (recently published successful books similar to yours)
Main Action (plot/big idea)
Emotional Impact (theme/promise to reader)
Unique Selling Proposition (USP/what differentiates your story in the marketplace)

That's a lot of information to cram into a minute-and-a-half. The following suggestions can help make the process of crafting such a miracle snippet a little easier.

 

1. From author and creative-writing coach Tomi Adeyemi's "How to Pitch a Literary Agent in 5 Easy Steps":

5 Questions You Should Address in Your Pitch

What is the title, genre, and word count?

What is the setting?

Who is the protagonist?

What is her conflict?

What does she have to do to overcome this conflict?

Here's my takeaway: Strip your story to its digestible essentials. The pitch is not so much about the grand ideas you might be trying to explore or communicate, but rather about boiling down your ms to the kind of description you might find on the back of a book or under the title of your favorite streaming show.

Why I love this advice: Tomi does a great job in her blog post of showing how a well-known story, The Lion King, could be described through these five simple questions. Even though my own ms shares little in common with the Disney film, just having a concrete example to look at and compare my work to definitely eased the process of drafting my first pitch.

 

2. From author and pitch-guru Jane Friedman's "How to Pitch Agents at a Writer's Conference":

Take the pressure off: it really isn’t a make-it-or-break-it moment.

...The truth is that in-person pitches have about the same success rate in gaining a writer representation as a cold query, less than 1 percent typically.

If you become overly focused on this mythic opportunity—and hearing that “yes” or “no” verdict—you might miss out on the biggest benefit of the pitch experience, which is getting instant feedback on your project. ... To the best of your ability, try to approach the pitch process as part of the business of being a writer.

Here's my takeaway: Embrace the fact that the chances of being signed with an agent are quite low by focusing instead on getting useful feedback and delivering the best, most professional pitch you can.

Why I love this advice: Part of what makes pitching so nerve-wracking is that, ultimately, we have no control over whether the people we talk to are interested in our projects. Here, Jane is telling us to take back some of that control by making our goals about pushing and bettering ourselves. Nothing has done more to decrease my stress than taking this advice to heart. 

 

3. From writer and life-coach Tracey Barnes Priestley's "5 Important Tips on How to Pitch a Literary Agent In Person":

Practice, practice, practice!

...When you finally feel your pitch is ready, you must take ample time to practice. Aloud. ... Pitch to your family, trusted friends, your writing group...[or] haul yourself in front of a mirror.

Here's my takeaway: Actually, this one is pretty self-explanatory. The more you practice, the better your pitch will be. The better your pitch is, the better you will feel about it. The better you feel about it, the better your pitch will be.

Why I love this advice: While most of us don't really need to be told that practicing as much as possible is a good thing, sometimes hearing it from an outside source helps cut through all that inner noise and reminds us where our attention needs to fall. Especially if, like me, you would really rather not hear your words out loud.

 

4. From an interview between best-seller, cartoonist, and Writer's Digest editor Bob Eckstein and Hugo-nominated editor Diana M. Pho:

Writer’s Digest (WD): ...What ratio of the pitch should be solely about the book as opposed to selling yourself and expounding on your credentials?

Editor, Diana M. Pho, Tor Books: First and foremost, I want to be intrigued by your manuscript! When thinking about your pitch, I appreciate getting the stats, of course (title, genre, word count, comp titles), and then pull me in with some plot description. ... Personal information isn’t as important to me, unless it directly relates to your project or your writing career (for example, it is an #ownvoices story, or you are an award-winning author).

Here's my takeaway: The content of your pitch should be about about your manuscript, not about you.

Why I love this advice: Although it's always important to come across as someone who would be good to work with (professional, likable, knowledgeable, realistic, open to feedback), for me, getting permission to not actively try to sell my background as part of my book was a huge relief. As with the other advice on this list, knowing what to focus on (and what not to) takes away much of the uncertainty and anxiety involved in preparing a presentation, while also ensuring that the final pitch is as streamlined as possible.  

All of the above are excerpts from longer essays, lists, or interviews. If you're preparing to pitch for the first time, or just want an update or reminder on what to do, check out the full articles for even more useful information. And best of luck!